I had a spate of people who decided, instead of improving and editing the document, to trash paragraphs and insert moronic images into the work.
I’ll provide an edit link for the next chapter only to people I know who specifically request access. As usual, morons are why we cannot have nice fucking things.
I’ll be putting out the chapter after repairs in a bit. Thank you to those who did help with editing and ideas.
It is currently 7:50 PM CST 8-30-15.
Editing will be reviewed at midnight, and I will decide if it needs further review at that point or if to post. If it is not posted then it will be posted by 7 PM tomorrow evening CST.
There’s no need to make comments — feel free to edit the text directly — unless you have a question,in which comments are the best way to go.
I don’t know who put in the line about Tela Vasir and her adventures on Korlus but I am totally using that in this chapter. 😀