Help me get this crap fixed.

I have a number of people who’ve often left reviews or PMs catching minor or stupid typos or missing words on my part. Other people have read sections of the work that are not up to snuff, or had ideas I wish I could have utilized.

Normally, I prefer to keep most of my work hidden, since spoilers. But some people like the idea of helping, so in the furtherance of that:

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ratUBJvgkWlkMFk_wk0SDPMaAAlBYWFP5qoeVDt3u7c/edit?usp=sharing

The above link will allow you to edit (and view, duh) the current draft of the chapter I’m working on. The link will remain, but once I publish I’ll blank the page until I have the next one ready.

I’ll probably push this one out later on tonight. I’m still editing one piece I need to post.

2 thoughts on “Help me get this crap fixed.”

  1. Suggested a few alterations but beyond that, I find the style of your work to still be good apart from a few spelling errors.

    The flow was nice and good.

    Only have one nitpick, I made a mistake getting rid of Valern’s comment to Tevos because setting was ‘Edit’ instead of ‘Suggest’ – I was under the impression that the Thirty knew of Jack and Trellani already. Valern saying this to Tevos seems…idk, shouldn’t Tevos already be aware of this? Or perhaps Tevos doesn’t given her low ranking compared to the Thirty.

    Awesome work man.

  2. Thanks for the update man it sounds like your feeling better.
    I do have mixed feelings about showing your work early but mainly because I can’t decide whether to read the draft or wait until you post.

    My problem though, not yours.

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