A few more improvements and it will go out tomorrow morning — if you haven’t made edits or suggestions now would be the time to do so.
A few more improvements and it will go out tomorrow morning — if you haven’t made edits or suggestions now would be the time to do so.
I saw chapter 30 up. It sounds like things are getting ‘interesting’ on Ilium, and I’m certainly on edge hoping that Shepard gets over there before things go too far sideways.
If only someone showed her the video of the Sisters in action.
I also enjoyed seeing how Archangel’s team reacted to their rescue. It feels right; after all that, it’s a hell of a comedown for them to realize they actually survived. I sense a little tragedy in the making with Melenis and Garrus, once he finds out Telanya survived.
And T’Armal is a BITCH. Even given the constraints she thinks she’s under, she is a stone-cold, heartless bitch.
Great to have you back.
THANK YOU!!!
Really good!!!